Kennon
Hi
IPTers,
Got something totally new and different I've gotta have you look
at. Would you please provide feedback for me?
If YOU have a benefit that you find with this product line, please
tell me so I can add that in on my short copy.
Here's the link: http://www.kennonfort.com/beaded-flowers/
Thanks,
Kennon :)
RoyB
Hello
Kennon
The sales page looks good to me. The only problem I saw with my computer
is the 3rd picture down ( The Purple Dahlia ) did not load completely
( about 35-40% loaded ). The flowers look very well made. If they
are as good as they look she should expect to sell out fast!
Good Job!!
Kennon
Thanks
for the positive feedback, Roy. I had one guy in Sweden
I was instant messaging with who told me none of the pictures
appeared and then I got that fixed. He didn't say anything about
the problem you experienced.
Anyhow, I do hope Donna and I can sell some of these.
Kennon :)
PS- I did get your email tonight...I'll try to respond tomorrow.
Yoon
Ho Um
Hello
Kennon,
Nice! The beaded flowers would make
cool gifts! Donna's doing some great
work there.
-Being sold through ebay?
-how many does/can she make per week?
-what payment methods are being used?
I really like the personal touch of your
web site letter. Very people friendly.
Helping Donna out- gotta love that.
Ever thought about teaching others how
to make beaded flowers too? Perhaps a
"tool kit" for making one of the flowers?
Hmm... maybe add something about how
"you can place them places real flowers
can't go"
"save yourself the inconvenience of replacing
the water and throwing away your wilted
flowers."
"love flowers, but got allergies? enjoy the
beauty of these beaded flowers without
the problems"
Are you focusing mainly on interior decorations/
interior design?
"Hey guys your fiance will love you for sending
her these[note: you want them to buy more
than one so use 'these' instead of 'the/a']
beautifully handcrafted flowers.
Show her that your love really lasts a lifetime/
forever."
Ideas off the top of my head. Thanks for sharing
Donna with us Kennon!
Kennon
Thanks
for the feedback and ideas on the copy and more.
I don't really know what exact quantities she's made in the past...
I do know sometimes she'd have a few helpers do one step of the
process for her so she could make more flowers.
Currently, as an agent for her, I'll accept payment via PayPal and
possibly by check or money order and then get your orders out
rapidly.
Again, thanks for the ideas on how to highlight more benefits!
Kennon :)
Louis
Hi
Kennon
A couple of thoughts:
I feel a picture right at the top, either to the left of the headline
or above the headline would be helpful, and would help capture attention
of prospects.
And my feeling is that a contact form on that page rather than an
email link would be more effective since it's always easier for people
to be prompted and fill in boxes rather than type an email from scratch
to someone they don't know.
Kennon
Originally
posted by Louis
Hi Kennon
A couple of thoughts:
I feel a picture right at the top, either to the left of the headline
or above the headline would be helpful, and would help capture attention
of prospects.
And my feeling is that a contact form on that page rather than an
email link would be more effective since it's always easier for people
to be prompted and fill in boxes rather than type an email from scratch
to someone they don't know.
Great thinking, Louis! I just had to get something up and get it
going. I hope I'll be able to implement all these ideas you guys
have without taking time away from other priorities.
Kennon
:)